Not bad for a second

A lot of it is somewhat muddled, but still enjoyable. Melody at 0:25 is awesome. The bass at the end was very well done. Overall, pretty good and driven.

Dammit zora, you never tell me anything

Awesome. Like, awesome awesome. You're right about the long pauses thing, but overall if you just pull all of it together very well done melodies and mixing =)

Catchy =D

I love the melody of this song and the build at the beginning. The only thing I could *almost* find to criticise is the snare sounds a bit synthesized at times, and cuts off abruptly, but, frankly, I like that effect sometimes, and it doesn't distract much. So yeah, overall, awesome job, and though you're right about it being repetitive, it's also not long enough to really be a problem. Love the voice, too. So excellent job =)